Ben 10 Porn Story: The Freak and The Red Head Chapter 3
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Disclaimer- I do not own Ben 10 or anything in the Beauty and the beast!
Chapter 3:
They Just Had To Come Today
“We should be there by now.” Max murmured staring at the map in his hand. According to the map, he should have been there a few hours ago, I mean it was only a forest over. As Tilly, the Tennysons’ favourite horse, hesitantly galloped foreword. She scanned her surroundings. It was a dark scary place. She was afraid of dark scary places. Tilly looked around nervously as she heard another trig snap. She didn’t like being here one bit.
As she continued to gallop foreward, she reached a fork in the road. The left looked slightly the same but if you squinted you could see a light at the end. To the right it looked darker, scarier if possible. Tilly neighed and moved her head to the left but Max grabbed the reigns and moved his right hand to the side to making her turn that way. Tilly huffed in response, she wasn’t very sure this was a safe path. Max patted Tilly on the hand with his left hand.
“It’s a shortcut.” Max said. Tilly sighed, she knew she wasn’t going to win. She then heard a howl in the distance and trembled slightly. Just because she wasn’t going to win, doesn’t mean she didn’t have the right to be scared. Max gave Tilly a kick and off they went at a slow pace, on the path that Tilly feared. The right one.
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“Gwen, I’m gonna take a nap.” Ben yawned as he lifted his arms above his head to stretch. Gwen nodded numbly, sucked into the world of Aladdin. Ben just shrugged and walked upstairs to his room. Gwen just sat curled up reading her book not knowing what was happening just outside her house.
“She’s a lucky girl.” Mike commented fixing his tie.
“She is a lucky girl.” Michael agreed putting his jacket on. Once Mike was done readjusting his tie, he stood up straight and turned toward Michael.
“You know what do, right?” Mike asked. Michael nodded, “While your inside make sure everything is perfect out here, then when you and Gwen come back out start the music.” Mike nodded.
“Good.” He walked down the isle, which as only a red carpet. Passing all the smiling faces of the village men, and the crying ones of the village woman. He stood next to the pope and clapped his hands together to get attention. Everyone instantly quited down.
“I’d like to thank you all for being at my wedding to the beautiful Gwen,” the girls started crying harder. “Now, all I have to do is propose to her.” The village men laughed, knowing that she was definatly going to say yes. Mike then turned to the door of the Tennyson residence and knocked on the door.
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“You afraid to fight me you snake!” Aladdin yelled as he held the sword. A circle of fire was surrounding him now, he was going to die, and he knew it. But if he was going to die, he was going to die fighting that snake. Jafar smiled his creepy smile at the boy.
“A snake, am I? You’d be surprised how snake like I can be.” The evil man said cryptically. Suddenly a puff of red smoke surrounded him. Once it was gone, it revealed a huge red snake with a predatory gleam in his eyes, which were staring down at Aladdin. Jafar bent down to kill Aladdin and snap him up. He repeated this movement until Aladdin nicked him with his sword in the face.
“Rik ‘im, Rak ‘im, Rock ‘im, Rake! Stick that sword into that snake!!” Genie cheered waving huge flags with Aladdin’s face on them.
“S-s-s-stay out of this-s-s-s!” Jafar hissed. A poof of blue smoke covered Genie for a second to reveal him waving a small flag with a ‘J’ on it.
“Jafar, Jafar, he’s our man, if he can’t win” Genie started out slowly and boringly. “GREAT!!”
Jafar sprang out again only to have Aladdin swing his sword toward his face, almost nicking him again.
“Aladdin!” Jasmine called. Aladdin turned to see the sand almost reaching the top and Jasmine struggling to stay alive. “Jasmine!!”
Seeing the boy distracted, Jafar then coiled his tail around Aladdin. While Aladdin struggled to get out of the bonds that were Jafar’s tail as the snake himself leaned down to look Aladdin in the eyes.
“There’s-s-s-s no us-s-se fighting this-s-s s-s-street rat! I’m the s-s-s-s-stronges-s-st creature alive! All thanks-s-s to you little Genie.” Jafar hissed.
“Genie?” Aladdin mumble while stoping his stuggling. “Genie!”
“What?!” Genie yelled. “It’s not my fault! He has my lamp!” Aladdin ignored him and looked defiantly into the Jafar’s evil, old eyes.
“The Genie has more power than you could ever have! He could take your powers back!!” Aladdin yelled. Jafar drew back in surprise. The boy was right.
“Al, why are you bringing me into this?” Genie asked standing behind a pillar.
“Your right boy.” Jafar stated. “Genie my third wish is-“
The sound of knocking broke Gwen’s attention away from the book. She left the book open to the page she was- turning it face down as to not lose her place- and stood up from the coach.
“Who could that be?” The red head murmured. No one ever visited. After all, this was where the “crack pots” and his grand children lived. Gwen walked down to the door and looked through the peep hole. Gwen groaned at who she say. Gwen begrudgingly opened the door not wanting to be rude.
“Mike, what are you doing here?” Mike just smiled his “charming” smile and let himself in and walked to the family room. Gwen internally groaned, she shouldn’t have opened that door. Closing the door, she saw a disgusting sight. Mike was sitting with his eyes closed at where she was just a few seconds earlier his feet were propped up on the table. The disgusting part was, that his muddy boots were on the table. Right on top of her book.
“Gwen, there isn’t a girl in town who wouldn’t want to be in your shoes.” Mike stated taking his boots off with his own feet. Tossing them carlessly to the side. Great, now his feet were on her book.
“Oh, and why may that be?” Gwen asked false sweetness laced within her casual question. She slowly walked up towards the table and grabbed her book.
“Today, is the day we’re getting married today.” Mike announced.
“WHAT?!” Gwen yelled dropping her book in shock. Mike grinned and stood up.
“See, I left you speechless.” Mike started to approach Gwen while she backed away. She gasped when she felt the door behind her. Mike trapped her in his arms and leaned down to kiss her, while Gwen’s hand frantically searched for the door knob. There! Got it! She opened the door quickly leaning against it. Mike, surprised by this quick action and fell head first into a puddle of mud. Gwen then slammed the door closed causing Michael to start up the band. The door re-opened only to see Mike’s boots flying out and landing in a jumbled mess just an inch away from the puddle
Mike stood up covered in mud. His face was red with anger. How dare she did that! Stalking towards Michael, the boy looked up at him with innocent eyes. “How did it go?” Mike grabbed Michael’s collar while he stood up, causing Michael to be held in the air.
“I well have Gwen as my wife.” Mike swore.
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Max was having difficulty riding Tilly, she was nervous and scared. It was obvious. Tilly was always scared of the dark, thanks to her previous owners. Another howl was heard. Tilly jutted out of her nervous gallop and looked around. Max sighed and pulled on the reigns.
“Let’s go back, Tilly.” Tilly walked back nervously complying only to run into a tree. It shook and ravens flew out and started attacking them. Max screamed in shock and tried to move the raven away. Tilly ran foreword causing the raven to fly away. She neighed in fright as she looked down the cliff. Thank goodness she stopped. Max got a hold of the reigns again and pulled on them. Tilly’s eyes were wide with fear, one more noise, she was going to high tail it out of there. A howl was heard. That was it.
Tilly neighed and went on her hind legs causing Max to fall off, “Tilly!” The horse ignored him and ran straight back home, where she knew it was safe.
Max watched his horse run off there was nothing much he could do. Snap. Max turned his head to see two gleaming yellow eyes staring hungrily into his own.
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Gwen leaned against the door, just in case someone else tried to come in and tell her to get some sense. She heard the music cease and the village girls squealing with joy. She still didn’t move, even though she heard a thump from upstairs. When she head all the footsteps were gone, she sighed and walked to her book. She picked it up and wiped off the mud that Mike’s feet left on her poor book. She then heard foot steps running down the stairs. She then saw Ben in the door way his hair a slight mess as he looked at Gwen.
“What’s going on? I heard something outside.” Ben slurred. Yup, he was definitely asleep.
“Mike came by.” When Ben heard this name he looked his cousin in the eye. “What happened?”
“He said we were getting married! Can you believe it? That boorish, arrogant man said that we were getting married!… Ben! Stop laughing!”
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Max quickly slowly stood up, not wanting to have this creature attack him. The animal slowly stepped out of the bush. It was a wolf, and he wasn’t alone. Max eyes widened in fear at the pack of wolves. He turned and ran as fast as he could, the wolves following his trail. He ran, and ran, and didn’t look back. The snarls he heard showed how far they were behind. Ahead he saw something, he ran a little closer to it’s direction. He was close enough now to see what was there. A large black gate, with a castle not far behind.
He ran a little faster, but the snarls were still pretty loud. He reached the gate and grasp the bars tightly.
“Someone! Anyone! Help!” The snarls were getting louder. Max couldn’t wait any longer, he opened the gate and closed it swiftly behind him. The wolves snapped at him getting his shirt and tearing it. A piece came out and fell to the floor. Max instantly fell back and started crawling away from the gates. The wolves slowly started giving up their attempts and with one last look at Max they ran off.
Max stood up and then it started to rain. He was only in the rain for a few seconds, and he was already soaked to the bone. He wrapped his arms around himself and walked up to the hug doors of the castle. He hesitantly knocked on the door. It slowly opened by himself. Hesitantly he opened the door looking around the huge room in front of him. Walking in he closed the door behind him.
“Hello! Is anyone here?” Max called out. He heard whispering.
“He must of wandered from Bellwood.” A voice said.
“Shh! Be quiet!” Another voice said.
“I was chased by wolves! And I was wondering if I could stay the night.” Max called out again. He then heard the voices again.
“Come on, Alexa, let’s let him stay.” One of the voices pleaded. The first voice.
“I’m not sure, Kaylin… Remember the last guest? I think he might be in the coco hut now.” The other replied.
“True…” The first voice said. “But still! It’s the right thing to do!”
“You’ve been spending way to much time with Little Chris…” The other muttered.
“Um… I hear you! May I please stay the night?” Max called out again walking closer to where he heard the voices. He head a light slapping sound.
“Ow! What was that for?” The first voice cried.
“Now we have to expose ourselves. If he goes to the nut house. I hope you feel bad.” The other one nagged. They both stepped into the light one was tall and lean, she looked like a lizard. She was purple with black strips. She wore a lilac outfit that fit snug against her body with a dark violet rose symbol on her chest. She also had a black helmet that was up to show her purple face and brown eyes. On the top you could see a little of her brown hair.
Her friend looked like a green human. She was lean and tall also and had dark brown eyes. She wore a simple white dress that flowed to her knees. Her hair was tied back in a pony tail. White daises were on a straight line starting at her shoulder blade to her wrist. Her feet were in white flats and she looked straight into Max’s eyes.
“Welcome to the castle! I’m Kaylin!” The green girl greeted. “The girl next to me is Alexa.” The purple and black lizard nodded.
“Nice to meet you.” Alexa said. Kaylin grabbed Max’s hand and led him to a small den with a fire place and a huge chair. She led him to the chair and gently pushed him down.
“Sit. Your soaked, you should stay by the fire.” Kaylin said. Alexa nodded.
“So, what’s your name?” Alexa asked.
“My name’s Max Tennyson.” Just then two little black and white creatures walked into the room. They had orbs as shoulder pads and they had little outfits that X-ed on the front and covered their entire bodies. Their bare arms were both white. The difference were that their orbs, shoulder pads, and eyes were both different colors. One was light blue blue and the other one was red. Max stared at the kids and the kids stared back.
“Chris! Anakin! What have I told you about staring?” A woman scowled. Max looked and saw a woman that would look normal, if she wasn’t entirely a glowing red. The only thing on her that wasn’t red was her cloths and her gray colored eyes. Her gray eyes looked up in shock at seeing the old man.
“What is he doing here?!” She asked. She then looked at Kaylin and Alexa as they looked down toward the ground, looking like two kids being caught trying to steal cookies from the cookie jar.”Did you let him in?!”
“No! He wandered!” Alexa answered.
“Yeah, we thought that we could let him stay till the rain stops…” The woman glared at Kaylin. “Or the night. We didn’t think that anyone would find him.”
“Yeah, no one would notice an old man sitting in masters chair.” The woman sarcastically quipped.
“Well, not like we can do much now.” The woman sighed. She turned toward Max and raised her hand for him to shake. “I’m Becky. Nice to meet you…?”
“Max Tennyson.” Alexa filled in. Becky looked toward Alexa.
“Get Mr. Tennyson some tea.” Becky ordered.
“Why do I have to do it?” Alexa whined.
“Who’s the one with wheels for feet?” Becky asked.
“Oh, right.” Alexa then turned and sped out of the room in the flash, not even a second later she arrived with a teapot and a cup in her claws. She handed the cup to Max and poured the tea in. “Enjoy.” Just then the little blue and white creature walked up to Max and smiled brightly.
“Hi! I’wm Cwris!” He said. He then pointed to his red twin. “Awnd that’s Ani!” Ani’s lips stayed in a line as he nodded toward Max. “Where’d you come from?” Just when Max was about to respond the boy the fire suddenly turned out. The warm den turned ice cold.
“Uh-oh.” Chris said cowering to his mother (Becky )while she picked up little Ani. Just then four eyes were seen in the dark.
“What are you doing in my castle?!” The creature boomed.
“H-h-he was in the rain, and he wondered in and we thought-” Alexa stuttered.
“So you let him trespass?!” The creature boomed again. It swooped down and gabbed Max by the arm and dragged him away. Alexa, Kaylin, and Becky watched as they left. This wasn’t good. Not good at all. Chris’ large light blue eyes looked at his mother.
“Mowmy, will we ever shee that nwice man again?” He asked. Becky sighed.
“I don’t know, Chris. I just don’t know.”
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“Ow! You don’t have to hit me Gwen!” Ben chuckled evading her attacks now.
“Yes I most certainly did!” Gwen replied. “Bet you wouldn’t laugh if some obnoxious man asked you to marry him.”
“Whoa there,” Ben held up a finger. “One I don’t think anyone would ask me to marry them any time too,” he then held up another finger. “And two, I’m not gay so I don’t think that’s going to happen.”
“You sure about number two?” Gwen smirked. Just then a neigh broke their bickering. Both Gwen and Ben looked at each other then walked outside. They started to panic when they saw who’s horse it was.
“Tilly!” Gwen exclaimed breaking into a run toward the horse with Ben at her side.
“Where’s grandpa?” Ben asked. Tilly simply neighed and pointed her head toward the woods. Ben took off the cart off Tilly and jumped on her saddle. Gwen jumped on behind him. Ben was about to protest, but sighed. It wouldn’t do much help. They both galloped off into the woods.
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It was dark and cold. Max shivered. He was in a dark cold cell, the only window was at the bottom of the door. The only thing that was relativly soft in the room was a pile of hay. That-that-that person, he didn’t know what to call him, had just threw him into this dark cold cell. Suddenly he head voices again.
“Kevin! How could you do this?!” A voice, female by the sound of it, yelled.
“He was trespassing, Julie.” It was that beast. His name must be Kevin and the woman yelling at him must be Julie.
“So?! He’s an old man, he’s probably cold and soaked to the bone!” Julie yelled. He heard a loud cracking sound.
“He’s my prisoner. I’m the king of the castle. Your the princess. Now shut up and stop bothering me about it.” Kevin growled. Max heard footsteps. They were loud at first then they became faint.
“You didn’t have to punch the wall…” Julie sighed. Max then heard the outer door opened. Then light footsteps coming toward his cell. The little light that came from the little window at the bottom of the door was now shining. Like someone was holding a glass of water up to it.
“Are you okay?” It was Julie. Max crawled toward the door. He looked out the small window and saw a young translucent woman. She had long black hair up to her mid back and bangs. By the looks of it she was Asian. She had on a white dress that went to her knees and a long sleeved jacket. She was the only human looking person in the castle. Max nodded.
“Y-y-yes.” He lied. Julie frowned.
“I’ll go get you a coat.” Julie mused. Walking out of the room she quietly returned a few seconds later. She then pushed the black coat through the window. Max took it with shaking hands and put it on him. He saw Julie sit down.
“I’m sorry for Kevin. He’s the one who put you into that cell.” Julie apologised. “He’s a good person, he just has anger management problems. And you caught us on a bad day here.”
“It’s okay.” Max said. It wasn’t a total lie. But it was still a lie. “Everyone seems nice here. Except Kevin.” Julie giggled.
“Yeah, I think a lot of people would agree with you on that.”
“JULIE!!” Kevin shouted and some what whined. “WHERE ARE YOU?!”
“I’m sorry I have to go.” Julie sighed. She was at the door when Max suddenly spoke out.
“Why do you go to him?” Julie’s brown eyes looked into Max’s.
“Because he’s like my brother. I could never turn my back on him. Especially now.” With that, Julie walked out of the hall.
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“This place looks creepy.” Ben commented.
“Are you sure this is the place, Tilly?” Gwen asked. Tilly neighed and nodded. Gwen dismounted. She slowly walked toward the large black gates and gingerly touched the gate. Leaning on it she scanned the large courtyard. Then she saw a piece of red cloth.
“Ben! Grandpa was here!” Gwen shouted. Ben was suddenly at her side and Tilly seemed to have run back home. Tilly must have been scared out of her mind.
“What? How do you know?” Ben asked. Gwen pointed at the piece of cloth. “Oh,” Ben said as he opened the gate and walked toward the doors of the castle.
“Ben! Wait up!” Gwen called closing the gate behind her and went to Ben’s side. This place was creepy. The trees were bare, it’s leaves fallen on the floor. The sky was gray. Weird. It was sunny over in Bellwood. Gargoyles were decorated over the huge palace. They crossed the small bridge and then they were in front of the door. It was open.
“Grandpa must have been here…” Gwen murmured.
“No duh.” Ben whispered. He took a deep breath and opened the door wider. They both took hesitantly walked inside to see if anyone was there.
“Hello?” Gwen called. “Has anyone seen our grandpa?”
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“Mommy! Mommy! Two pweople are in the cwastle and one of them’s a girl! And she’s pwetty!” Chris shouted. Becky just shook her head.
“Don’t lie, Chris. I would expect Ani and Hayden too but not you.” Becky said.
“Hey, I resent that!” A man defended. He was tall, bulky, and red. He had four eyes and four arms. He then wrapped one of his arm around Becky. “It’s not very nice to say that, Beck.”
“When have you ever known me to be nice, Hay?” Becky shot back taking his arms off her. She then picked up Chris and Anikin and dropped them both in a tub.
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“Hello?! Is anyone here?” Ben called out.
“No one’s here, Ben, this is stupid,” Gwen sighed. Ben sighed too. Maybe this once, Gwen was right.
“Over here!” A voice hissed. Ben and Gwen looked around.
“Who said that?!” Ben demanded.
“If your looking for the old man over here!” Another whispered. Just then a slap was heard.
“Stop abusing me, Alexa!” The second voice whispered. They heard a chuckle.
“Fine, Kay, you’ve been abused enough today.”
“Who’s there?!” Ben shouted again looking around. Just then they saw a torch light up and dirt flying. They also felt an unnatural breeze pass them.
“Okay. Creepy.” Gwen stated. Ben nodded in agreement. He then walked up and grabbed the torch. He then opened the door. A strong gust of wind hit him. Ben shivered, it was cold. He saw a stairways that spiraled to the right. He looked at his cousin.
“Stay here.” Ben ordered.
“No way! I’m coming with you!” Gwen said defiantly. She then marched up to her cousin, snatched the torch and marched downstairs. Ben sighed and followed.
“Do you think we should have done that?” Kaylin asked as they watched from the balcony above. Alexa shrugged.
“I’m not all to sure but we already did it. So no point in asking.” Kaylin nodded.
“To true.”
“Now,” Alexa started glaring at Kaylin slightly aggravated. “Get off my back, woman!! I don’t wanna be a 16 year old with back problems!!”
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Gwen and Ben walked down the stairs with only the little light that came from the torch. When they finally reached the bottom there was another door.
“What’s with this place and doors?” Ben muttered. Gwen ignored her cousin and opened the door. It was a dark barren hallway and their was only one window that shined the moon light in, and straight into a certain person’s cell.
“Kids!” Max shouted.
“Grandpa!” Gwen and Ben shouted. They ran toward the door and instantly fell to their knees each grabbing one of Max’s hands.
“Grandpa! We’ve been looking everywhere for you!” Gwen exclaimed.
“Kids, get out of here!” Max warned them.
“Not without you!” Ben shouted. Just then, the torch in Gwen’s hand went out and four yellow gleaming eyes were staring at them.
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“What are you two doing?” Becky asked. Both Alexa and Kaylin squeaked in surprise.
“Doing? Us? Nothing!” Kaylin denied. Becky rolled her eyes.
“Yeah, right. Two people don’t stare down a balcony unless their doing something. And knowing you two, your up to something.” Alexa mocked a gasp.
“What’s that supposed to mean? We’re not always up to something!” Becky raised an eyebrow. Alexa looked away sheepishly, “Okay, maybe we are.”
“Tell. Me. Now.” Becky demanded.
“Never!” Kaylin shouted. Just then a huge shadow covered them. Both Alexa and Kaylin looked up to come eye to eye with a four-eyed creature. Known as Hayden.
“What are you doing?” Hayden demanded putting his arm around Becky’s waist. Kaylin and Alexa looked at each other before sighing. They then told them what happened and who came. Both Becky and Hayden just stared at Kaylin and Alexa as both girls looked at the ground sheepishly. Then Chris walked up to them with bubbles covering his body and a water trail left behind in his wake. His innocent eyes looked up at Becky as he had a huge smile on his face.
“I twold you their was a girl in the castle, mowmy!”
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“Who are you?!” A voice boomed grabbing Gwen’s shoulder and turned her around. Everything was dark except for the stream of moon light shining in through the window.
“Who’s there? Show yourself!” Gwen demanded.
“The master of this castle. What are you two doing here?!” The creature demanded again.
“We’re here to free our grandpa.” Ben answered. The golden eyes stared at Ben. Ben didn’t show it, but he was downright terrified.
“Well he wouldn’t be there if he didn’t trespass.” The master of the castle said.
“But he could die!” Ben yelled.
“Not. My. Problem.” The creature growled.
“We’ll do anything!” Gwen pleaded.
“There’s nothing you could do.” The golden eyes stared her down.
“What if I take his place?” Gwen asked. His golden eyes furrowered in confusion.
“What?”
“She means if we both take his place.” Ben corrected. Ben wasn’t going to let his cousin stay in a castle alone with-with… this thing and who knows what else. Max’s eyes widened in shock.
“No! You kids still have lives to live! Places to go!” But his shout fell on deaf ears.
“You’d… switch places with him?” The master asked in shock. Both Ben and Gwen stepped into the moon light and nodded.
“If we did… Would you let him go?” Ben demanded. The master stared down at both of them.
“You both would have to stay here forever.” The master said. Gwen looked toward the eyes curiously.
“Step into the light.” Gwen lightly demanded. He looked hesitant, but he complied. He was tall and had a mop of long black hair that reached his large shoulders. In terms, he was grotesque. He was distorted and looked like different creatures from some unknown countries( or planets) were put together in one creature.
Both Gwen and Ben gasped but didn’t look away. The one thing they’d agree they had in common, was that they were stubborn till the very end.
“You have our word.” Gwen solomly swore. The master walked toward the door and opened it. Max wrapped his arms around Ben and Gwen.
“You two kids don’t know what your doing! I’m old, I’ve lived my life!” Max whispered. He was then picked up by the collar and dragged him out of the room, locking it behind him. He then threw Max into a near by silver metal box looking contraption. He pressed a few buttons.
“Teleporting to Bellwood… Now.” The machine beeped. Then, Max materialized out of there.
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Gwen cried into Ben’s chest until they head a light knocking at the door, then it opened.
“YOU MONSTER! YOU DIDN’T EVEN LET US SAY GOOD-…!” Ben yelled until he saw that it wasn’t the beast. But a very beautiful, albeit translucent, Asian woman who looked very confused and mollified. “Bye.” He ended lamely. Staying here just got a perk. Gwen sniffed and looked up too see Julie.
“Who are you?” Gwen asked. Julie walked toward them and put the blanket she had with her around them.
“I’m Julie. I’m the mistress of the castle.” Julie told.
“Your married! To that-that monster?!” Ben yelled shocked. Gwen glared at Ben through glassy eyes and slightly punched his shoulder. Julie giggled.
“No, I’m like his sister. His parents took me in when I was a baby. I was a princess from a kingdom that was destroyed by a war. My parents were very close to Kevin’s.” Julie explained. Ben raised an eyebrow.
“Kevin?” He asked. Julie sighed and looked out the window.
“The so called ‘monster’,” Julie told she then looked at Gwen and Ben. “He’s not a monster. You just have very bad timing.”
“What do you mean by that?” Gwen sniffed. Julie sighed and looked down.
“Today is Kevin’s birthday. A very sad day here in the castle,” Julie looked back at Gwen and Ben again. “As you can tell this isn’t a normal castle. It’s cursed. And it was cursed the day of Kevin’s birthday.”
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Author’s Note:
Okay! So, what do you think? I worked four days on this! So if you notice a lot of grammar errors. It’s because I suck at grammar. But please don’t say this is a bad story. Unless I’m making the characters 2-D or something, then you can. Anyway, hope you liked the story.
And, oh my god, this is so far NOW the longest chapter. IT’S OVER 5,000 WORDS! NOT INCLUDING THIS!! For me, that’s pretty dang long.
-Alexa